The plot has me really curious, the dialogue is natural, and the art is great.
Can't wait for more pages :)
Art is nice. Dialogue is terrible and kinda borderline racist.
All righty. . .
Glad you're enjoying the art at least. And the dialogue is supposed to be racist since Carl is, in fact, racist. Any chance you'd be able to provide some constructive feedback about the dialogue besides that it's terrible?
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